Under the Rug
There was an old man named Pablo Sanchez. He needed some place to live that it’s cheap so he chose an apartment. He lived there a long time so he can earn enough money to buy a house. Then one time at night like 2:00 a.m. There was a magical rug. The rug was there standing looking at Pablo sleep. Then Pablo woke up and the rug hid. The old man saw that there was a basement. He went in the basement and then he saw people there. Pablo thought they were just sleeping but then he checked if they were still breathing. None of the person in the basement was breathing so apartment. Then Pablo saw the rug standing like a human. Pablo was afraid of the rug because it looked scary. Then in a little while Pablo fainted and then he died. The rug grabbed Pablo and put him in the basement. Now any person that lives in the same apartment that Pablo lived you will DIE!!!!
May 15th, 2007 at 1:46 pm
You need to make it longer and add MORE [MORE] detail!!!!